A Story

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A Story

 

One cold and sunny morning Dan and Mark pushed their canoe into the river. Dan asked Mark where the map was, but Mark had not brought it, because he knew this river well.
Later they stopped to have a cup of coffee. Suddenly [note] they saw a kingfisher. Dan wanted to follow it. They got back into the canoe and started following the beautiful, colourful bird.
A short while later, when they decided to turn around, Dan and Mark saw a waterfall. They were quickly getting closer to the edge, but they couldn’t stop.
Just then two fisherman threw a rope to them and pulled their canoe to safety. Dan and Mark were tired, but relieved. They thanked the fisherman . But the important thing was that they were safe.

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